Kardashians’ Reality show Evaluative Essay
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In last week’s written assignment, you composed a draft of the evaluative essay where you were to provide a criticism of a film, television show, album, work of art, or piece of literature and provide valid arguments for why you believe the work is, or is not, worth experiencing.
This week, use your instructor’s feedback on the draft, the Peer Review Services, Strategies for Revision or other Rasmussen resources to help you revise and polish the essay.
this is the feedback from prior week
your essay did provide a critique and you covered most critical areas. However, you needed to also comment on these area(s): plot, writing, editing, acting, etc.When you write your final edited review next week, please include those areas.Your essay did not cover the critical areas a reader would expect to find in a review.Part of the strength of your paper is the valid arguments for why you believe the work is, or is not, worth experiencing.
