AIAM Abortion is Murder discussion
Humanities
Is Abortion Murder?
Abortion is murder. First, abortion causes psychological problems. Second, abortion may lead to future medical problems for the mother. Last, abortion violates the unborn child’s right to life.
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Sentence Templates + Transitions
Derived from Graff and Birkenstein’s crazy-helpful They Say, I Say
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Remember: the templates below are meant to “be direct with [you] about the key rhetorical moves that [critical thinking] comprises” (Graff & Birkenstein, 2010). Think of them as moves in a video game or a sport–the better we get at the game or sport, the more comfortable we get with knowing when and how to use a move best.
With that said, play around with these, notice how they are used in the writings of others, and determine that you will grow as an arguer this year.
And remember this, too: argument is hard, and hard means we get to grow rapidly if we dare to go all in.
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Introducing What an Author Says
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Introducing “Standard Views”
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Introducing an Ongoing Debate
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Using a Quotation (i.e., Backing up your argument with proof)
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Explaining a Quotation (i.e., Showing that you understand what the quote says)
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Naming Your Naysayers or Opponents (i.e., Introducing your rebuttal)
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Making a Concession (i.e., They have a point, BUT…)
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Disagreeing, with Reasons (i.e., They are just wrong)
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Transitions
For ADDING IDEAS:
also another in fact equally important moreover
furthermore additionally indeed in addition
For MAKING A CONTRAST:
however nevertheless although conversely
on the contrary notwithstanding even though all the same
on the other hand by contrast nonetheless
For COMPARING:
likewise equally along the same lines
similarly in comparison in the same way
For CITING AN EXAMPLE:
for example in other words in fact
for instance specifically after all
as an illustration consider
For SHOWING RESULTS:
accordingly hence consequently
as a result thus therefore
For REINFORCING AN IDEA:
especially important above all most noteworthy
especially relevant a significant factor most of all
For ELABORATING (expanding upon a point):
actually by extension to put it another way
to put it bluntly in short to put it succinctly
in other words ultimately basically
For CONCEDING A POINT:
admittedly of course although it is true that
naturally granted to be sure
For CONCLUDING:
clearly hence consequently
obviously therefore thus
in short all in all
