Parenting practices: Amato and Fowler – African American Famliy
Humanities
“The APA style looks good overall, but double check the capitalization of your journal titles and you have missed italics for some references. When discussing the methods, you should include the ethnicity of the participants if it is not mentioned in the title. If the sample is not African Americans, you should address this in your summary.Your evaluations are pretty basic. The sample size or saying that the study was conducted well is not a really meaningful piece of feedback. Really think about what is good about the research. Be specific. Does it offer a look into a sample that is not highly studied? How does it make an impact on your paper specifically? Your summaries and descriptions of use in paper look good.“
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