My teacher gave me this comment to complete my paper. please complete the research and make sure to put every thing in the comment. make it longer and in good shape as the teacher wants.
tons of good research here. I wonder if there’s a way you could add an interesting angle so it’s not just 100% research. Maybe you could argue BECAUSE OF ALL THE RESEARCH that we should do something flatten the curve, or that we (anybody) made a mistake by doing or not doing something. Does that make sense? I want to you to have a good thesis and use the research in service of that, instead of just 5 pages of research that hasn’t really been shaped. Does that make sense?