revise-an-essay-1
revise-an-essay-1
Here is the topic and requirement,please read it and revise my essay.
The role of women in the modern world has changed greatly and rapidly. Many things, like the traditional marriage contract of the past, that were rooted in the culture of past, where women were weak and powerless, have to change in a world where women increasing are equal in virtually all ways.
Given this change, what would a “Modern Marriage Agreement” contain? If YOU were going to pair up for a hoped-for long period of time, what would YOU want in such an agreement — understanding that such an agreement must be agreed to by your proposed partner?
Note I do not all it a “contract” since it may not even be written down; that’s up to the couple. However it is recorded, it must represent a mutual agreement that both stick to.
Explain what you want in it and why, and make clear way this agreement has to be different from the traditional marriage contracts of the past. 500-700 words
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