SF001 Walden University The Role of Financial Management discussion
Writing
I have highlighted for you what you the areas that you need to edit. See the comment below
Please see my observations on the attached document! You ONLY relied on what the company claims they do on their website! That is not correct as your job is to vet all of the information!
Have you studied my announcements, assessment instructions, and rubric? It is imperative for you to understand the use of good academic writing (visit the Walden Writing Center), use of online library for academic resources (not internet sources), SEC.gov for financial filings (not annual reports from a company’s website), and most importantly, your job is to do vetting of anything companies claim on their websites. When you provide explanations, you must ONLY use credible resources.
Would you ever cite https://theflatearthsociety.org/home/? I doubt it! Why would you cite what it is on a company’s website as if it was true? You MUST vet any claims by a company with support of other credible sources, and you are well advised to seek the financial filings with the SEC.gov because these are audited
You have failed to use the financial reports from the SEC.gov and insist in using what the company provides on their website.
Unfortunately, the majority of the resources you use are either from Coca Cola or from sources that are not necessarily credible!
Did you visit the Writing Center? Did you search the SEC.gov website for the financial statements of Coca Cola? Have you vetted all claims on the company’s website? Did you look for the many previous lawsuits the company has had due to unethical behavior?
